I Can Hear You Breathe

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I Can Hear You Breathe


I Can Hear You Breathe




In….Out….

For hours, just the slow sucking of air

In…..out…..in…..out….


He came awake with no noise

His ocean eyes glowing blue fire

His face painfully radiant, no words, no words

Not old, Not Young, But somehow

Somehow

Somehow

Whole again.


Looking beyond me, his lips move,

speaking words I cannot hear to someone I cannot see,

Yes Yes Yes, the father nods, joyful in his choice….


In…..out…..in


The  struggle an instant, his face tightens to a grimace,

a momentary tug of war,  Body grasping for soul,

then comes the tender release…

His eyes zero, the beautiful into ash, the whole into husk

And with a sigh of relief,  the final life ending Out... he was no more…

 

In the stillness

 I slip my hand beneath him

Feeling his warmth

One

Last

Time.

 

Katylove©2009

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BlackButterfly1 commented on I Can Hear You Breathe

07-22-2010

Katy, this poem.... there is something about it that tells me the sexual experience described here was not a pleasurable one. "Yes Yes Yes, the father nods, joyful in his choice…." hmmmm... I wonder if I am overthinking.

freind commented on I Can Hear You Breathe

01-30-2010

well katy i can relate to this one. very nicely done it makes me think of some of my stuff. i loved this one keep up the good work. i will read on

poeticprose commented on I Can Hear You Breathe

08-28-2009

A nice poem that is doen so simply. The magic hefre is in your concise writing. I love the last stanza.

dahlusion commented on I Can Hear You Breathe

08-13-2009

This is so deeply moving, so poetically rich in feelings, emotions, and sadness.

Katylove

08/17/2009

This one was very personal for me.. Thank you Kind Poet.. for noticing my work~

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

Katylove’s Poems (16)

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I Choose Not to Listen 2
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Sgt. FUCK 9
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My Lovely 8
I Can Hear You Breathe 4
My Current Affair 9
Tryptosalad 2
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Jump Already! 4
Faraway 8
See You See Me 8
My Privacy 15