I can look beyond flaws Can you?

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I can look beyond flaws Can you?

I can follow your words speak only few
i'll take the time to understand
dont waste time on small minds
when you know you got good heart
I dont need a perfect sentence
I have no will to nuture insecurity for perception and its weakness
to tell you what you mean when you know what you said
turn away from negative people 
its never important to hear
any negative conviction they throw your way 

 

Some people are so smart at English language

Yet cannot think outside the engrish box

When you’re poking at my words

With daggers of red pen to satisfy thee

Your failure to see beyond your Modern rules

Seas wave over the ocean and across seasons 2

That’s where you’ll find me

Spelling it out for you

One missing letter heres a hint

The clues are obvious in the words that follow

So stop your grammar policing showdown

Unblock your disapproval

Listen or you hinder while you gloat

 

From Aussie Shores

Here the slang rolls of tongues

Anything goes interpretation flows

And the words don’t sound out the same

Spell bound by language will screw you

We spell words differently yet people forget

We don’t spell words the same and the sentences

Well they carry on, so why cant you

 

WHEN SPOKEN you’ll hear the same thing

Why is your voice inside your head?

So incapable of following what’s said

Take out your COLOURFUL red Pen

O the coloUr the encyclopAedia in your mind

Seems to only be of a local kind

Step out the box what do you know

I’m not always so incapable

Need me to spell it out for you

Grammar is bound by location standards

Here we sit on the world wide internet

Oh how clever we think we are

Who closed your box?

It was your mind all this time

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windsongs commented on I can look beyond flaws Can you?

06-19-2013

said turn away from negative people its never important to hear …what a pure though-good thoughts here:)

pura

06/19/2013

:)

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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