I Can't Anymore

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    I Can't Anymore

    Time has passed I can't feel you anymore. I can't smell the cologone I gave you on the teddy bear you gave me. I can't remember what it sounds like to hear you whisper my name and how sexy I am.
    I close my eyes and try to see your smile, but I can not!
    I can't feel you pull me close to you at night as if you would think that I was going to get out of bed and not return.
    I  can't hear your laughter or the way it sounded when you would try to sing, and it was off key.
    But the things I can hear is the loneliness without you. I can hear my heart breaking everytime I think of you.
    I can hear my tears hit the pillow at night when I try to sleep . I can still hear our favorite song"Kiss me on the phone" playing in my head.
    I can still hear the anger in your voice when you said it was over.
    I can always hear when you said that last "Goodbye".

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    fawndesno10 commented on I Can't Anymore

    07-03-2009

    I gues alls i can say to that is that sometimes goodbye is the only way. good job on your poem.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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