I CAN'T HOLD ON ANYMORE

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I CAN'T HOLD ON ANYMORE

i can't hold anymore,
i am lost in my pain 
i am searching for you
take me in your arms
and take away my sorrows

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Chaos128 commented on I CAN'T HOLD ON ANYMORE

12-02-2010

A very stylized and evocative epigram, terse and direct. I'm a little confused, though, over your tagging it "inspirational".

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

aparramore’s Poems (25)

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I NEED YOU 0
I KNOCK ON YOUR DOOR 0
I CAN'T HOLD ON ANYMORE 1
THE LIGHT IN THE DARKNESS 0
LOOK UP 1
BLACK WORMS 1
SO LONELY 0
NOT IN CONTROL 0
BLACKNESS 0
ALL THE WORLD IS INSANE 1
FUTURE 0
IMMORTAL WHISPERS 1
DEAD WITHOUT YOU 0
TEARS NO LONGER FLOW 0
COLD WINTER 1
WASTELAND 0
I AM THE VICTIM 0
I SCREAM DO YOU HEAR ME 2
SOMETIMES 0
DRIVING 0
TEARS FROM THE SOUL 0
PAINTING ON EMPTY CANVAS 0
NOTHING IS THERE 1
Slowly 0
Drink From me 2