I can't...

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    I can't...

    This has to be done alone.
    noone can help me, I'm in this myself.
    I'm stuck with no answer,
    not even the problem is known.

    I have all the time I could need
    but it's not nearly enough
    how do I repay,
    the bitter taste of greed.

    this will never end
    I was hurt so badly
    I can't forgive,
    my closest friend...

    me.

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    Utopia666999 commented on I can't...

    03-22-2009

    aww hun sad poem, liked it but sad..

    janetdawson commented on I can't...

    03-22-2009

    very understandable

    sk commented on I can't...

    03-21-2009

    Your poems seems to twist at the end, yet you don't do it just for effect; Very interesting style...

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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