I could make you happier

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    These are the thoughts that have been running through my head.

    I could make you happier

     A single tear runs down my face
    as I remember the sad truth-
    You don't like me
    You might like her
    and you don't know it
    but I like you.
    Every time I think of it
    I can't help but be sad
    but If you think you would be happy with her
    then I'll let you.
    Anything that made you happy
    at least for a while or more
    you shouldn't regret.
    I'm happy that your happy
    but sad
    because I really do think
    I could make you happier. 

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    winterkou commented on I could make you happier

    10-08-2010

    so dad and true , soemimes we think in a relationship soembody else could make that person happier dont feel like your getting everything out of that relationship that u need.
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    jessicanichole commented on I could make you happier

    09-17-2010

    that is so sweet u really like him but u want him to be happy
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    jerseycrtz

    09/18/2010

    yepp lol

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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