I could of loved you more.

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    i hate when he does this to me.

    I could of loved you more.

    i feel beat down and broken.
    Does it make sense?
    Can you see me, wrapped around your shaddow?

    i'm bitter toards you, You are a Liar.
    sympathetic are your faults.
    I hate you for giving me twisted emotions.

    Importance willows beneath you.
    You wont even listen to me, Why do you choose this?
    your selfishness astounds me.
    It takes all of my giving to get burned by ONE of your words.

    You lose all your greatness by a flip of a coin.
    STILL...
    You win, I lose.
    This is a Game?

    Who was the boy that sat on a chair next to me on the best day,
    Who heard me before i spoke?
    You-"i wasn't me in the beginning."
    You are Fake.

    All my hopes for my future, your a timeline today..
    a best friend never, i am an inhibited heart.

    a heartbreaking melody, and all is YOU shinning through me.
    A dance in the rain, and as i turn my back you disappear around the corner...
    ethereal shadow.

    i'm yelling in the speaker phone, and your headphones are on silent.

    You dont hear me. I might as well have defunct.

    i could call you my neighbor, had you befriended me.

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    WordSlinger commented on I could of loved you more.

    08-14-2009

    Cool, I hate when that happens, so I understand this more than ya know, Keep your head up.

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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