I Crave...
I crave death,To end the suffering.
I crave suffering,
To end the pain.
I crave pain,
To end the sadness.
I crave sadness,
To end the happiness.
I crave happiness,
To end it all
I Crave...
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- TaCoNiNjA35F00
- NeverShoutNever helps me through the tough times
To end the suffering.
I crave suffering,
To end the pain.
I crave pain,
To end the sadness.
I crave sadness,
To end the happiness.
I crave happiness,
To end it all
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Poem Comments
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Musicmynded1 commented on I Crave...
02-22-2011
- i would say a little re-arranging and it would be a well rounded poem... nice ending
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Ninjaboy commented on I Crave...
02-20-2011
- oh so true my fellow poet......................... ---ninjaboy---
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