I didn't know

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    I didn't know

    So long ago I was just a little girl,
    One with a dream so deep inside,
    Willing to give our life a whirl,
    I didnt know the things we'd find.

    We found a love so deep inside,
    One we can't let go,
    Even if it was our stubborn pride,
    You know I love you so.

    I didn't know the softness of your caress,
    Or the gentle way you'd look at me,
    I didnt know, my life, you would bless,
    You're the one who holds the key.

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    optimistic commented on I didn't know

    06-19-2009

    This is a great right, the poem seems to flow across the page well and you give great images and description. Good write

    jademelissa74 commented on I didn't know

    06-19-2009

    A very sweet, emotional poem! I can feel the love wrapped in every phrase! Great Job Alexia! Continue to write!

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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