I dont think you know who I am!!!

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I dont think you know who I am!!!

Man was created but couldn't be alone .

As with all creations they can always be upgraded, improved.

I was created by the king himself as he thought of man and what it would take to make him Great.

He knew man could carry a world on his shoulders but understand the name he chose for me... Woman(Wo short for world) "For only something great could carry a world and the man within her.

The king took a rib from you so that I could be a part of you, understand that it is the same rib that protects your Legacy.

Strength he gave to you in Muscle so that in your quest to be great you had something tangible to look at and gage it by.

but he was more subtle with his second creation as man is so quick to be competitive ...which competition was not the Masters intention when I was created.

So Woman was given her strength in other ways like the ability to forgive, to bring forth life, the inner yearning to raise her family to new heights always taken a seat behind her "man".

The ability to create, mold , inspire, achieve, with a Look, smile, the sway of her hips, the touch of her finger tips, the song on her lips and as always with the meals she prepares with love.

Dont forget she is a part of you so she has the potential to be a a adversary of worthy proportions as well as a loyal and faithful servant . because she wants too......

Just like the human race men get posessive and want to be in control of everything, taken for granted all that he has already .......wanting more...

Until he finds himself alone again.........

But the king knew the short comings of his first creation so he made 7 or more of his second creations so that you will have that many chances to learn from your mistakes.

Do you want to come home to Nothing or a WOMAN?

You have the choice to choose but remember who I am and why the king blessed you with me and how easy he could take ME away!!!!!!!!!!!!!

So take the opportunity when ever possible to tell me you love me, how much you appreciate me for all I do for you.......

Man may hold the key but Woman is the Door way to life that can be opened with other things...what else can you do with your key?

You do know who I am?............ DONT YOU.........Oh you inferior creature.......I AM WOMAN!!!!

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warsaw commented on I dont think you know who I am!!!

08-22-2009

You are one bad sista !! thank you for sharing your talent with all of those that will read, It's deep and profound and true, thank you again sincerely WARSAW ( virgo from Harlem) but I'm in Cali right now

dymondz

12/16/2009

tyvm for the love baby...

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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