I Dream...

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I Dream...

              I dream of you at night when I am sleeping. I dream of you during the day,listening to the radio or walking down the street. I dream about the way you used to hold me. I dream about the way you used to touch me. I dream of your body next to mine, filled with warmth and love. My dreams are about you and alot of memories are too. Cause you really know how much you mean to me. I dream of our happy time, sad and troubled times too. I dream that maybe one day it maybe might be the way it used to be.

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sammia commented on I Dream...

04-16-2010

Great write. I have to agree with lithiumblack below me. If you feel the emotions as you write then the read will also feel those came emotions

ThatGurl

04/17/2010

Thank you, my emotions is what my writting is based on. My emotions give the words. Lol they also take them away, but nevertheless. Thanks for reading..ThatGurl

lithiumblack commented on I Dream...

02-26-2010

Excellent poetic tug at the emotions. I always say, that if you're feeling something when writing, your audience will feel something when reading, and the loss comes through beautifully in this piece. Great job!

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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