I Dream...
I dream of you at night when I am sleeping. I dream of you during the day,listening to the radio or walking down the street. I dream about the way you used to hold me. I dream about the way you used to touch me. I dream of your body next to mine, filled with warmth and love. My dreams are about you and alot of memories are too. Cause you really know how much you mean to me. I dream of our happy time, sad and troubled times too. I dream that maybe one day it maybe might be the way it used to be.I Dream...
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sammia commented on I Dream...
04-16-2010
- Great write. I have to agree with lithiumblack below me. If you feel the emotions as you write then the read will also feel those came emotions
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04/17/2010
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lithiumblack commented on I Dream...
02-26-2010
- Excellent poetic tug at the emotions. I always say, that if you're feeling something when writing, your audience will feel something when reading, and the loss comes through beautifully in this piece. Great job!
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