I gave it all away

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    I have felt this way in the past. This one is a bout loss of love.

    I gave it all away

    Your eyes have captured me
    Your words have caged me in
    But when I am with you
    I still feel alone

    There is a hole where you left it
    A wound too deep to fill
    I feel it growing darker
    Everytime I cry

    The shadows suround me
    With thier sneres and laughing eyes
    Why did you leave me
    To face this world alone

    Did I love you too much?
    I gave you more of me than I had
    I gave you my heart and soul before you left
      And you took it with you to the other side

    I am lost with out you.

     

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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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