I Gave You

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    I Gave You

    I gave you a smile, You gave me a frown.
    I gave you my hand,you turned around.
    I gave you the time, You didn't give a day.
    I gave you the day, You didn't give me the time.
    I gave you my heart, You threw it on the groung and stomped on it, then gave it back except the peice that was left on the bottom of your shoe.
    I began to cry, You began to laugh.
    I thought you were everything I could ever dream of. but I finally woke up.

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    lithiumblack commented on I Gave You

    03-06-2010

    You may have been young, but youth usually deals in the harshest truth, truth hurtled well at the subject of this piece. Great write!

    alb29oclfl commented on I Gave You

    03-04-2010

    I have sadly remember a moment in my life, when I gave a frown following a smile I received and her expression forever etched. I learned the power of a frown, and not to give them at all. Thank you for a gentle reminder.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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