I hate you, Mr. Fate

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  • ApaqRasgirl
  • Back online after loosing internet for a long time. I am very happy to finally be back with all my friends and I hope to de writing and posting soon. Love Asha

I hate you, Mr. Fate

Today is just not my day
Tears of sadness streaming down my face
A broken camera lens, broke my heart today
Threatens to dash all my hopes of something great

Another cruel joke Mr. Fate has thrown in my face
A twist of fate has made this such a bad day
My mind just refuses to contemplate
How will I know make a living from what I can't afford to replace

Oh fate, how much I hate you today
Just break my heart and throw it away
What twist do you have in-store for me tomorrow
Something else to break & bring me sorrow

How silly it seems to cry over a broken lens
If you could see Mr. Fate, inside my heart, would you then
Understand how much joy, taking natures photos, fills my heart again
Please just stop your cruel twists of fate

For I must sell my pictures just to buy a loaf bread for God's sake
Look Mr. Fate these are not tears of joy streaming down my face
Fate you twisted my heart then shoved it back in
Such struggle we all have go through, just to survive these days

Will you take what hope for a better life I have left
Go ahead, dam you fate, dash my heart on those your cold stones, fate, whats next
Did you not see how happy taking pictures made my heart not break
Dam you cold fate, now how do I fix what you broke, without money to replace.

Written by
Asha
July 24, 2010

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carynontherhine commented on I hate you, Mr. Fate

07-26-2010

Asha, Oh no! Not the camera? I am sorry. However your talent will remain and another camera will be on the way. I like this Mr fate. Though I have a hard time in believing in fate. With love I always say that though. To find the right one is fate. Weird. I must think about this and read it again. I like it!!!!!!!

ApaqRasgirl

07/26/2010

thank you dear friend for your loving comment. sometimes fate is good to us and sometimes he seems to want to torture us. but life must go on rather fate wants us too or not. loves ya bunches asha

kdarcy commented on I hate you, Mr. Fate

07-25-2010

Damn, reality can be cruel, its hard to tell the difference between fate and reality, is it in the acceptance factor or how we go on? Nice write, be well for another many days

Charlie23 commented on I hate you, Mr. Fate

07-25-2010

Fate can sometimes be a good thing - However, does not seem to be the case here. Hate that your camera lens broke when it assists in paying your bills...

ApaqRasgirl

07/25/2010

thank you dear for the caring comment, it was a bad day yesterday. love asha

WordSlinger commented on I hate you, Mr. Fate

07-25-2010

Asha, I trully understand this, I think there are mutiple pranksters, not just one, running around playing jokes on us, for better or worse, ty WS

ApaqRasgirl

07/26/2010

thank you dear friend for your kind words. without that zoom lens there is no way to get the shots I need of wildlife or the closeup ones of other beautiful things I run across when I am out on a shoot. yes fate played its cruel joke on me the other day, and I am still searching for a place to repair the lens or somewhere to find a replacement I can afford, which is not much......thanks for the caring comment loves ya asha

ginga commented on I hate you, Mr. Fate

07-25-2010

Asha, Yes Mr. Fate tests are ability to survive again and again only to make our conviction stronger. If this is a true story I hope you have someone nearby to take a look at your camera. It may be something small. Excellent cutting edge frustration and angst penned in this one. ginga

ApaqRasgirl

07/25/2010

thank you dear friend for the great comment. and yes it is a true story, the end of the lens just fell out in my hand yesterday morning. that just made the whole day a disaster. I cannot work without that zoom lens, the wide angle one just will not do when you are taking nature and wildlife photos. but I am in search of someone here to can fix it hopefully. oh btw, I don't know if you have ever visited my photography website or not but I would be thrilled if you visited it and as I tell all my friends, take a journey with me through "All Things Nature" withe Angel's Photos. please stop by and have a look at some of my shots. click on the table of contents to see older shots. http://angelsphotos.co.cc I hope you enjoy them loves ya asha

ApaqRasgirl

07/25/2010

oh and when you do visit, please leave me a comment and let me know how you like them, that helps so much when it comes to selling my images printed up for people. thanks loves ya asha

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