I hear you

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    I hear you

    The words you speak, use to have meaning
    they use to ring a nice melody in my ears.

    Now all you speak to Me, goes in one ear, over My head and
    gone with the wind.

    Still you find it comforting to you to hear yourself speak. Jibber-jabber,
    what does it really matter?

    Distruptive to your own Soul, thinking no one hears you or really cares. Speak of positive energy and I hear you all Day. Talk all that wicket, mean, spirited trash.

    Makes one lash back just the same. That's the pain in the game.

    Yes! In the past I've herd you many times over again. Sing a true melody and maybe I'll one Day hear you whole-heartedly, the way
    you captured My Heart long ago that far off Day.

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    Sx9 commented on I hear you

    12-16-2009

    lol look this is part 2.he was like this at first where you just love his vibes,then bla bla thats all u hear.something have change,,nice work,,love this..

    DLSmith commented on I hear you

    05-28-2009

    When I first looked at this poem as a whole, I thought it was going to be all over the place, but once I read it, it flowed along quite nicely. I think we have all been here a time or two, but you wording was done very well, thanks for sharing.

    StillaRose

    12/10/2009

    True! At times I appear to be all over the place. My Heart is always Precious as Gold...Glad you enjoyed. :)

    ccslim commented on I hear you

    02-20-2009

    A tune my heart has heard before! Nice job with content and control! To be heard with ever speaking a word is the song all should hear and hold without fear!

    StillaRose

    12/10/2009

    :) The person I was refering to. Actually has a couple underground Albums. Like your advice.

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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