I just couldn't believe

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    I just couldn't believe

    A new beginning
    To a sad end
    I think back to the memories
    Of a past friend

    People never got him
    I couldn't understand
    He was hard working
    He was a great man

    He never was alone
    I was always there
    To help him through
    When he thought life wasn't fair

    People questioned me
    And thought I was wrong
    They said there was no such man
    That I didn't belong

    It came out to be
    That the reason they couldn't see
    Was that the man was imaginary
    I just couldn't believe



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    biggirl commented on I just couldn't believe

    10-25-2009

    its hard for others to believe whats going on with you when they cant see the picture in your dream.

    Tempestlady commented on I just couldn't believe

    09-27-2009

    Life changes us all. Sometimes unrecognizeably. Like a slap in the face. Wonderful rhythm, very nice rhyme, i'll read more of this anytime. Keep up the good work. tempestlady

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

    DarkPoet17’s Poems (17)

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    I just couldn't believe 2
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    You'll never change 2
    Look in my eyes 1
    You promised (for Jordan G.) 0
    Be who you are 0
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    A birthday tragedy 2
    I miss what we use to be 2
    Why didn't you want me? 1
    Why couldn't I just tell him? 1
    Goodbye dear friend For now it is hello 1
    Get what i'm talking about yet? 2
    The Memories you kept 2
    When your love turns into hate 2