I just stood in the doorway

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  • Friendship

    I just stood in the doorway

    I just stood in the doorway



    I want the dirt bank
    that we found coal in
    and convinced ourselves that if we
    dug a little further
    we would find diamonds

    Watching you sit on my gray couch,
    your husband's arm around your shoulder,
    I see how we have grown

    past pretending to be
    Thunder and Lightning,
    best friend horses divided by a continent.
    You drive trucks cross-country
    and I work at a grocery store.

    I want to lie on my front lawn.
    Shine flashlights at the sky.
    We were eight, trying to direct
    airplanes or communicate with aliens.
    You are here only for a few days,
    but already I am ten years old
    again asking you to make snow angels.

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    Rhymer commented on I just stood in the doorway

    03-11-2010

    Childhood soon gives ways to only memories and the child gets buried inside. I think I will let mine out to play a while. 10 from me thanks for memories

    gogant commented on I just stood in the doorway

    03-10-2010

    Childhood is fleeting, but the feelings we hold for the ones that were there, are forever. A very special thinking poem..........................g

    Trailmixed commented on I just stood in the doorway

    03-06-2009

    Memories of a child and how they relate and how they are similar to your observations today.

    cassius commented on I just stood in the doorway

    03-05-2009

    nice content and structure

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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