I love you

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    Hehe i like this one it makes me happy inside :)

    I love you

    The simplest speech,
    so easy to convey,
    though they posses a meaning quite deep,
    their definition many cannot portray,
    giddy thoughts linger in sleep,

    What could it mean,
    how could it possibly,
    Be,
    that such a small phrase,
    may evoke passion, ectasy, and freedom,
    swirling to caress me,

    To seemingly alter the world,
    Roughly heaving it upside down,
    the sweet syllables they call,
    my ears ring with the sound,

    I wish to emrbace them heartily,
    to grip so brawnily,
    i must never release,

    Some people think they know,
    some think they do not,
    do they?
    what a thought evoking thought,

    It's impossible to nueteralize,
    once set loose,
    you need it and relish it at the same time,
    replaying these words:
    I love you.

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    alaskawriter96 commented on I love you

    12-22-2009

    I like this poem. It makes me happily sad sorta weird but true

    uriah007 commented on I love you

    11-21-2009

    Now thaty was deep Lizzie. I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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