i love...

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    • hannahxP
    • the greatest litterary work of my life, will be the last i ever wright.

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    its kinda late and i should be studying for my french final but i decided to do something positive like wright about lovley things insted of negative stuff like studying a lanuage that i dont even speak! (which is odd because it was after all a year long class and the only french i know is from a british tv show)

    i love...

     i love to wake up...
            then roll over and go to sleep agian.
    i love showers in the mornings...
            to warm up my cold skin.
    i love my coffie...
            drinking from the mug i made.
    i love my memories...
            although some may fade.
    i love my crazy friends...
            the crazy stuff we do.
    i love my messy room...
            hey wheres my other shoe?!
    i love colorado...
            mountain sunset everyday.
    i love the rain...
            faithfully comming every may.
    i love the rivers...
            the lovley sounds that the make.
    i love the grass...
            in Pueblo theres not much to take.
    i love music...
            beauty in the sounds.
    i love my puppy...
            and all the pups in pounds.
    i love my guitar...
            Athena is her name.
    i love drawing...
            someday its gonna be my fame
    but most of all 
    never least
    always last 
    i 
    love
    you
    <3
    [Bcuz ur a blast]               

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    freemansvoice commented on i love...

    07-23-2012

    love is a great thing to look forward. I've had it and lost it , but the memories of love is forever. Never named my guitar. thanks for the poem
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    twayneking commented on i love...

    05-26-2011

    With that attitude, you'll probably survive nicely in this nasty old world. Your poem made me smile. Thanks.
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    hannahxP

    08/16/2011

    a;ways happy to share a smile thanks=]

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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