I miss love

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  • Lost Love

    I miss love
    It was a nighttime of daylight
    In a winter of new age
    Blown by the cold gentle breeze
    Off my feet, I was swept

    My day turned to night
    My night, a nightmare
    My sight visionless
    My mind in turmoil

    Freezed in a cold blue sea
    I hear songs from a colourful fish
    Take me if you want me
    Too heavy to move, so slow I was

    Away it went,
    With my heart easily stolen
    And the tides disappeared to nowhere
    Yes, I missed love

    And now I know
    Now I can see
    Now I regret
    That I missed love

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    Shajami commented on I miss love

    07-06-2009

    I really love this poem, its very deep but simplex and kinda sad but beautiful and very emotional for me. You won't miss love b/c if it is true it will find you and not just escape.
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    Jume

    07/09/2009

    First of all, I must tell you that I admire you a lot for the kind of heart you have. If you dont have a heart for love, you will not feel love. Thanks for the comment and the courage

    wagus commented on I miss love

    06-16-2009

    When ya older then look back now ya need to be looking around ahead or ya will miss that love.. age is that nighmare ahead for ya... and all of us.. youth is the dreams we all want to hold on to be loose... again well done poem...
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    Jume

    06/29/2009

    Thanks for your comment. I really apreaciate it. But how can you look ahead for love. can we plan for love. while I agree that age runs out on us while we search and wait for love, should we fall for anything because we need love?

    sassysweet commented on I miss love

    06-16-2009

    This is a very beautiful poem. People should take time to read again, to love what they read and to be able to comment on something as real as this.
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    Jume

    06/29/2009

    Everybody can not be you nor be like you. That is why we were all created differently. You have your special way of reading and appreciating good write-ups. That makes you special in your own way. Thanks for your lovely comment. You give me courage. THANKS

    Gbenga commented on I miss love

    05-09-2009

    Honestly I don't know how people vote. Why should a poem as beautiful as this get only 3 votes. I will give you 10 on this. It s beautiful.
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    Jume

    05/27/2009

    Thanks dogg! I've had a long day today but you just turned it around. Its good to have you feel me the way I feel it. I am not mad at the voting because it is only telling me to do better. keep in touch

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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