I Miss Love

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  • viejay04
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I wrote this poem on April 6, 2008...

I Miss Love

I miss being in love.
I miss dating the love of my life.
I miss cuddling, kissing, and sweet talks.
I miss exchanging love letters
and I even miss talking at night
and him singing a lullaby song
till I fall asleep without even saying goodbye.

I miss being hugged, being kissed,
and being told that I’m the love of his life.
I miss being held to his chest
So tight that I’m almost out of air.
I miss playing games, making silly looking faces, and teasing him.

I miss the fights, the arguments,
And the scoldings when we’re both mad.
I miss the tears that fall from my eyes
when he’s hurting my feelings too much.
I miss him running to me and hugging me
While saying “I’m sorry, baby”.
I miss being kissed all over my face
Till he gets to hear that I have already forgiven him.

I miss watching movies with him.
I miss the scene where I will lay my head on his shoulder
As he secretly smells my hair and telling me I smell so nice.
I miss shedding a tear because of the sad part of the movie 
As he laughs at me for being too emotional.
I miss poking him and telling him to leave me alone.

I miss walking hand in hand with him;
I miss the feeling that he’s the only one existing and no one else.
I miss him telling me silly jokes
While both of us are laughing.

I miss sitting on the bench and watching the sunset.
I miss him laying his head on my lap
And I, running my fingers through his hair.
I miss talking and reminiscing with him.
I miss discussing future plans with him.
I miss the way we tell each other
How we both enjoyed our day together.

I miss us parting our separate ways.
I miss the sad face we’re both showing
That we will surely miss each other.
I miss saying our goodbyes while hugging so tight.
I miss him kissing me so tenderly 
As he makes me feel so good inside.
I miss him pinching my cheek and telling me
“I will miss you, baby”.
I miss walking away then turning my head
And run back to him to get my last real goodbye kiss.

I miss missing him;
I miss Mr. Love.
I miss loving a person with all my heart
And I miss being loved even more.

I will not look for him…
but I’ll patiently wait for him.
I know he will come for me.
I know he will…
Yes, he will!

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goldygirl commented on I Miss Love

03-06-2010

Very good one! I like this one alot! especially the last 2 cuplets/stanzas

viejay04

03/06/2010

Thanks so much, goldygirl ;) you are Gold indeed ^_^v peace and love -viejay04

prophesy commented on I Miss Love

03-03-2010

how wonderful this gift of love. you are love, both woman and man. continue this journey of love. you are a true poet from heart./the prophesy

viejay04

03/03/2010

Aww! Thanks for those wonderful words! ^_^

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