I miss what we use to be

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  • Sadness

    I miss what we use to be

    Your leaving
    Im screaming
    Down on my knees begging and pleading
    I miss what we use to be
    I cant say im okay

    My heart is breaking in two
    So much left to do
    Your making plans
    Faster than I can blink

    Your on a plane
    faster than I can think
    Im there waving goodbye
    Wondering how you were just my friend
    And here you are gone

    Standing in the rain
    Knowing im hurting bad
    But Can't feel the pain
    Numb, Isolation, and Confusion

    It's all setting in so fast
    Why couldnt I speak up
    Why didn't I make it last?
    You were the only one
    I loved and missed
    And now we're done

    Your leaving
    Im screaming
    I miss what we use to be

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    Tempestlady commented on I miss what we use to be

    07-31-2009

    Sometimes it's the wrong tme in our lives, sometimes it just wasn't meant to be. Try t understand it all happens for a reason, hell, sometimes it's just the spring season. Emotions are fiickle, but love is perennial. Like the rhythm, loved the rhyme. You should write all of the time. Write on...

    pelaton3000 commented on I miss what we use to be

    05-31-2009

    I love it it's very beautiful I love it's clarity In the midst of tragedy love can linger without it though we would simply fall into a dark world

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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