I miss you baby!

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  • smartrissa
  • what happend to people you can trust? the closest thing i get to a best friend is the pack of ciggarettes in my purse.... messed up!

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Today my boyfriend went to court. It is a high poosibility that they will put him in jail for six months. At 9:09 AM on March 2nd, 2010 He went into court. Six months is the least sentance. I pray to god that he doesnt get that. I need him. and his child needs him!

I miss you baby!

I will miss you.
Today is the day your sentence is.
If you go to jail. I will have to live without you for six months.
I dont know if i can live without you for that long.
I already miss you dearly.
My head is spinning.
My heart is racing.
My life feels as though its ending.
I want you.
I want you to hold me at night.
God i miss you so much.
You have no idea how much!
I love you
With everything in me
I will come see you every second i can.
If i could i wouldnt leave you.
Six months...
Its so long.
I love you.
God i pray
Dont let him go.
I need him.
I need him!
Please give the jurry compassion and have them choose to not put him in jail.
God, please!
I am crying out to you.
Please!

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KShanay commented on I miss you baby!

03-03-2010

I wrote a poem like a year ago called "Hey Baby, I Miss You"... Funny thing is I wrote it in the middle of the night... As soon as I woke up... You write exactly what comes to your head... And I think that is a good thing... You said "I need him, I need him!" Because that's what you felt in your heart... I admire your writing...

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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