I miss you

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this is a true poem i wrote. it is for my friend trent who just lost his mother to cancer last friday. i know this is what he would write. i feel for this subject very much. you will be forever in my heart trent . i hope you all enjoy this poem.

I miss you

I Miss You

 

I miss you

and love you

with all my heart

I thought you loved me too

but I guess not

you gave up on me

you gave up on yourself

I already lost

a grandfather

a father

a grandmother

an uncle

and now

a mother

the day you died

I asked to be alone

and that is what

everyone did

I listened to

all the music

you liked

now I

cry all day

cry all night

over you

I just want to say

something

I really love you

and appreciate

all you did for me

you were a great mom

you may not know it

but you did

everything right as a parent

even though I am only fourteen

I know I love you forever

and I will do what you expect of me

to be strong for you and myself

I miss you


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LenaM commented on I miss you

12-27-2010

what a beautiful yet sad write I am in tears and losing loved ones to cancer is horrendous . I had my own battle with skin cancer at the age of 15 and while it was not the type to be life threatening the feelings that comes with that dreaded word you have :"cancer" well it's hard to express the feelings exactly . I ll be keeping Trent up in my thoughts and prayers that he will someday feel a measure of peace however little it may be

angelchaser commented on I miss you

12-27-2010

Oh my God, I think I'm gonna cry. This is just about the most beautiful poem I've ever read. So loving and so touching, sweetheart. This really moved me...and I rarely say that of a poem.

NavyLady commented on I miss you

03-31-2010

I really enjoyed this poem. I lost my aunt at the age of seven to cancer and to this day I still feel the pain. Tell your friend I'm sorry for his loss. Watching my cousins change from boys to successful men after the death of their mother really touched me and I know his mother would be very proud of her son. Great poem.

Dancer022597 commented on I miss you

03-29-2010

AW this is so sad. just reading it made me teary! good job though! tell ur friend im sorry for his lose!

tinamgoode commented on I miss you

08-08-2009

I like this one as well. You are talented and have a very big heart. I would like it if you read a few of mine and tell me what you think.. Have A Blessed Day!

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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