I need to love her

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I need to love her

I need to love her,she belongs to me now,
I will always love her, no matter what
Her voice is so soft and tender
And she lusts after me as I do her.

Tell me when will she be mine?
When can we share the passions.
When can we be so bold 
As not to have our love sold

I am going to love her at length
With every ounce of my strength
I will love her all the time,
She is all kinds of fine.

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dumplin commented on I need to love her

12-08-2009

How quaint! It seems, though, as though your definition of love is purely sexual. I could be wrong...don't happen very often, but I could be wrong. LOL

NJay commented on I need to love her

07-30-2009

Love is kind indeed. I see the passion flowing thinking you have her already but the next stanza explain it differently but you absolute resolution is commeding. I like the flow it is beautiful. Nice work.

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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