I need you

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I need you



Babygirl, I need you
I want to feel you, hear your voice, see your face
To feel your presence
around me
Im changing and I don't want to go through this alone
I just wish I had your arms to comfort me
Your smile to soothe me
Your kiss to set me free
as I change
to a newer me
I feel as if Im going to be different than I was yesterday
but different spiritually as well
As I become the man
you imagined when you met me and the man I am going to be
As I close my eyes
and lay on my pillow
I feel the changes happening but
I need you

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ApaqRasgirl commented on I need you

05-27-2010

this is a great write. you made it flow so well, and the passion in your words paints a loving picture. thanks for sharing Asha

tierra7 commented on I need you

05-27-2010

Charmin', I really love this lyrical share, I can hear it to musivc the flow is rather smooth...you're doin' good dear heart....please share these poems on Marys bridge... (( http://mareannspoetry.ning.com )) . Tierra@}-'-,

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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Close my eyes 2
As I turn away...My high place 1
Join me... 1
Sealed with a kiss 1
Walking away 0
Before you dream... 2
A Rose... 2
No longer 1
When the walk ends... 1
I need you 2
I Apologize 2
Before I lead 1
Looking over... 2
Hold me... 2
Special... 2
Journey of life 1
Missing you... 2
Not like you... 2