I promised

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    I wrote this poem when I was having a difficult time in my life only by believing God and holding on to him that I can get through these hard
    and painful days he give me strength to keep pushing on there is a light at the end of the tunnel

    I promised

    I promised to love you for all my life
    but I let the pain take that away

    I promised to honor and cherish all the
    good and bad times but I let hardship
    and selfishness come into play

    I promised you comfort and sirene times alone
    but I let worry and strife take over that day

    I promised to hold you high in my heart above
    my own but I let bad memories and dreadful thoughts
    hurt with the words I say

    I promised to forgive no matter what the cause triumph
    over the negative things but I let impatience non communication and self denial take what I was to forgive take its place

    I promised to be there when ever you needed me to hold you close in my comforting arms but I let neglect and
    anger and bondage push you away

    I promised to listen and stand by you forever but I let not
    loving myself stressed to the max take our love astray.

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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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