I Refuse to Die

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    Feeling stronger every day.

    I Refuse to Die

    No matter what the pain,
    There is no call to lie
    I refuse to let you take control
    I refuse to die

    No spirit is meant to be broken
    I see through your evil ways
    And making stronger my conviction
    I will build much happier days

    I move forward everyday
    Feeling confident and free
    I refuse to let You
    Pull the very life from me

    Each step I take
    Each thought passing by
    Reassures my Heart and Soul
    That I Refuse To Die

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    redbloodink commented on I Refuse to Die

    01-25-2010

    powerful..... the fight for life...... the choice to live... the choice to give.... the power of creating... you showed that here.... The write was GREAT! red
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    countrypoet commented on I Refuse to Die

    12-21-2009

    I really like this poem.It has a similar philosophy to my poem,"Proudly Walk Through The Fire". I think that a person needs to have the determination to not let anyone or anything bring them down or break their spirit.Life is meant to be enjoyed each moment of each day enjoying the simple pleasures and striving for worthwhile causes.Thank you for the wonderful inspiration and gentle reminder to keep "cowboying up" no matter what the circumstances are in life. Terry
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    purpleswan

    12/21/2009

    Life is meant to be tough, we just have to learn to make it smooth. A strong spirit and determination helps. Thank!

    MootPoint commented on I Refuse to Die

    12-15-2009

    Nice write. It flows very nicely. It is a 10 for me. :)
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    Oblaidon commented on I Refuse to Die

    09-16-2009

    I think this one can be expanded more. Tell me more of how people are bringing you down.
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    purpleswan

    09/16/2009

    I appreciate your comment and suggestion. I am not quite sure how to put the rest to words just yet. I have expanded on the original version. I may have to do a completly new one. Anyway thank you.

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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