I remember


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    I remember

    I remember


    I remember the dark

    The eerie cold place of my soul

    I remember the hurt

    All I wanted was a tourniquet to ease the pain

    I remember the fear

    The terrible clenching in my stomach

    I remember the sadness

    Nothing could help me but you

    I remember the tears

     Lonely salty tears like the oceans waves

    I remember the feeling of nothingness

    The soul drifting in and out of life

    I remember my prison cell

    The cold dark eerie place my room

    I remember the helplessness

    The feeling like my life would not change

    I remember the anger

    Couldn’t do anything with it because of the fear


    I remember


    I remember the way your eyes pieced my soul

     With unimaginable love, love that healed my pain

    I remember when you held me tight and kept me warm

    It guided my soul out of the cold darkness

    I remember how you smiled at me that first time

    It took my sadness of life

    I remember the first time you told me that you loved me

    The feeling of loneliness and nothingness died away

    I remember the first time you kissed me

    My life did change

    I remember the thing you told me

    You told me that you would never leave me

    The anger was wiped away

    I remember the funny little things that you do

    They make me happy

    I remember when you helped me break out of my prison cell

    You helped regardless off the cost

    I remember how much I love you and anything that bothers me melts away

    I remember only you

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    Bobbie876 commented on I remember


    this poem is straight from your soul..i can feel that....thank heavens for the people in our lives who have been there for us....looove this!



    Thanks, I was going though a hard time. My mom married someone who was mentaly abusing me though repeative lectures and put down some are hardly sayable. It was making my self astem almost vanish. I gad i meet My Boyfriend Lukas!!! : ) Thanks for the comment!!!! : )

    tanmayC commented on I remember


    Extremely intense... Isn't it wonderful how sometimes the sad things in life can create something so beautiful...like this poem... keep writing..



    Thanks for your comment every time I see a new one I get so giddy!!! : )

    Miriam commented on I remember


    wow i love ur problems there so wonderful to relate to. Your a vry inspirational writer glad i read ur poems wouldnt want to miss out on them :)




    Platti commented on I remember


    this poem is very strong and appealing to me, I love how it ends happy after starting out so sadly



    well it is my life Hope yours turns out happy also111 :3

    jademelissa74 commented on I remember


    Your poems is passionate and the feelings are vividly conveyed. You capture the inner content of a longing heart. Good job!



    This poem is about my past and what happened to save me form my past. My boyfriend.

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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