I REMEMBER

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I wrote this in memory of my aunt that died two years ago today. she was a great person and will always be loved.

I REMEMBER

 

I think about you everyday

And how I miss you in every way

I said goodbye for the last time

Two years ago today.

I still remember

Going over to you house

To spend the day with you

And we played every possible game.

But yet I remember

Me and you sitting together

And crying

That was on July 3, 2004

The day uncle died.

I can still hear you soothing me

Trying to make me feel better.

I remember asking you a question

Will he be my guardian angel?”

That was the same question that I asked

Grandma two years ago about you.

Now I think about how 13 is my unlucky number.

I think that you are always going to be

My guardian angel

And watching over me.

 

 

* DEDICATED TO ARLENE VOLK 1/13/2008 *

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786mona commented on I REMEMBER

05-13-2010

kind of sad...yet a beautiful write! :) keep on writing please!

Chaos128 commented on I REMEMBER

05-10-2010

The loved ones wemiss are always with us as long as we keep them in our heart! Good work, sk8ergirl; I know your Aunt Arlene appreciates it, too.

Panaramicpoet commented on I REMEMBER

04-01-2010

it is ver heartfelt . .i really enjoyed how if flowed. Thanks for sharing

tobi commented on I REMEMBER

04-01-2010

this is lovely, but as long as you keep her memory alive she's not really gone cher.

kmooney commented on I REMEMBER

03-31-2010

Very nice poem. I liked this alot. Very emotional. Thanks for sharing....K

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

sk8ergirl’s Poems (17)

Title Comments
Title Comments
I REMEMBER 14
There is No One There 7
In My Dreams 9
Next Stop.....The Light 5
why? 3
the darkness 7
The Thought......
.is love
8
Life Is..... 8
Falling 9
Karen Ann 1
Where did you go? 6
grandma i love you 5
anywhere 15
Bird Without Wings 11
I miss you 14
think of us 14
Anger 37