I SAW A STRANGER

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I SAW A STRANGER

A once familiar spirit ascended my stair
A young heart, sweet, paused short there
A young woman blooming to eye’s delight
She progressed up each tread, then, from sight

To gather my view, with past reminiscing
I looked for babe, Blue: for years gone missing
There sits a picture of tender and true
An infant turned toddler, still time runs askew

I saw a stranger, descend with soft sigh
She’s loves’ promise, from my beloved and I
Her dreams are her own, as are her worries
Times flies far ahead, as I’ve asked, “why the hurry?”

The sweat and devotion, toil of years
Is memories’ slow motion; I fight back the tears
Where are you, my child? I search time’s coast
Wading the tide pools: laughter, missed most

Sun of the high noon reflects from hair
As joy runs by waters, splashing for dare
Few are such days, exulting carefree
That father and daughter played by the sea

  I am the old man; it’s life’s plan, I gather
No re-setting the clock of this walk, though I’d rather
To have and to hold is a fleeting spring breeze
Fall destined soon, baring life’s trees

I saw a stranger abiding my home
She’s absorbed in long study
And scarcely can roam
Her mind and her form have dearly grown
As my reckoning takes refuge in years past sown

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gogant commented on I SAW A STRANGER

03-28-2010

They crawl into our hearts, and then when you're not looking, they are walking out on their own. Another memorable and great piece by you, Marck.....................................................................g

Marsink

03/28/2010

Yes! Day one: shoe-box baby... then you're attending their graduation from HS and college. Thanks for your summation and attentive words, George!

earthly commented on I SAW A STRANGER

03-28-2010

They do grow so fast-memories last-I love old photographs (have too many (according to my husband)-lol-Nice Sunday morning read-Thanks-namaste...Earthly

Marsink

03/28/2010

We have a great number of our two girls growing up: can't have too many when it comes time for them to leave the nest. I'm glad you found this a pleasurable read! thanks for kind comments

wamomo commented on I SAW A STRANGER

03-27-2010

I love this! What a beautiful write about the love and woes of parenthood...I look at my daughters and son much the same way...the time we have is so short...keeps me in the urgency and need to love them outrageously while they are here!...Thank you! Blessings ~ Wamomo

Marsink

03/28/2010

While my daughters blossom into their prime, I am like a withering leaf. Thanks for stopping by to find the time to see some beauty in this! I appreciate your comments very much

bklynrizz commented on I SAW A STRANGER

02-25-2010

Great write. Nice flow and rhythm and oh so true. I am in total agreement with you on this one. When I look at my childrens pictures of when they were little and then look at them now I am left wondering where did the time go. My poem A Rocks Magic addresses such an observation regarding my daughter. Great job.

Marsink

02/25/2010

My young life was consumed in 'growing up', and now, I have to endure the other side of that same coin. There are great times of warmth and reward, but seem to lessen as time marches on. thanks for. your timely encouragement!

mdpoetgirl commented on I SAW A STRANGER

02-15-2010

Beautiful sentiment... the love and evolving distance between father and daughter you've described here is palpable through your words. Great job!

Marsink

02/15/2010

Thanks, so much for the kind words of support. I do appreciate your visit and thoughts

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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