I stand beside

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I stand beside

 

I stand beside
that is all I can say
the wonder is found here
like a new fresh peach
after the blossom

A visionary nomad
crunching ground beneath
setting course
like an invisible wind
that directs the rain

Calling out numbers
like a child's play
to show appreciation
for the days I have been given
for each step I have made

I look upon mountains
to see myself as a part
of a masterly designed whole
in quartet to nature
and it's seasonal changes

I stand beside
that is all I can say
the wonder is found here
as creation never stops
even for the non-believers

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JACKiEL0VESJC commented on I stand beside

07-25-2010

This Is Very Good.. I Like The Way You Use Other Describtions As A Part Of You.. Very Good :)

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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sudden shivers 0
use of words 0
per se 0
pioneer 0
the quest 0
wide awake 0
welcome to cheap dates 0
crawling for candy 1
all made up 0
necessary diversities 0
burial ground 1
I apologize 2
beyond this 1
my rhyme or reason 1
a replica 3
I stand beside 2
imperial revolution 1
what I do know is... 3
a split tongue 1
a slight of step 1
a once a year occasion 2
a death 1
that amazing light 2
the eye in question 1
my crowded wall 3
no facsimile 2
a vision 2
before I am consumed 2
Compunction 1
essential 1
gewgaw 0
to be a better vine 1
passed by 1
criminal 3
soul burn 5
Thrilled 2
eyes to see 1
poker night 2
a hidden silence 1
you unfinished 4
deep-diving 1
600 mile void 0
untitled love 1
said and done 1
is it warm enough? 1
a song bird fate 2
sad bird 1
and so 3
to my friend 1
untitled 1
Hello to Myself 1
in plain view 1
half note 2
your neighbor 1
to those who forget... 2
that day will come 3
all eyes on you 3
Bella Claire 0
a mirror's poor reflection 1
dirt 2
within reach for now 0
red dawn surfacing 1
how close... 1
pictures do say more 2
forget not 0
I've missed it 3
all is forgiveness 4
it bounced back 4
figure eights 2
My Dancing Queen 3
more to go on 3
off its axis 2
glazed 5
flip side 3
easy now... 3
untimely 3
ignorance 3
exposure 6
one more time 0
inside out 1
queen of denial 3
another 180 degrees 2
and we must 1
It's Always You Too 2
The Cult of "Education" 5
only to return 2
hollywood entrapment 6
not so unseen now 4
Look! No Guard Rails! 4
you just made my day 2
Plenty Of It 3