I want you.

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This is about the boy i want my Boyfriend. Yet i know he will never date me he knows i like him. He never talks to me anymore though. Well he only talks to me when none of his friends are around.

I want you.

You caught my eye first glance.
Your tan skin,
Your smile,
Your eyes.
For that i knew something.
I want you.
To be your girl.
Why your eyes could make my heart melt.
Yet i cant love back.
I want you mine.
The way we would look together.
Would be great.
Yet you would look bad with the freak.
Still.
I can't help that i want you.
I Smile a small smile.
Yet you ingnore me.
Then a few days later.
I catch your eyes staring down my legs.
Did you want me then.
I stood still leaning all my weight on my right hip.
Then as i finshing my way down the hall.
I feel you eyes on the back of me.
Problely wishing my skirt was shorter.
I still want you.
Wanting to lean over one day and kiss you.
Then people would me ever freaker.
Then i could stop my wanting you.
Want knowing i cant have drives me nuts.

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When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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