I WANT

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    I WANT

      I Want you tuch I Want your love I Want you body next to me
    I Want to get lost out there with you in this room tuch me love me im yours my love
    I Want you to make me yours once more all day all nigth im all yours just love now take the
    time we have now and get lost with me in to a world of passion crazyness and sex love makeing is what i want from u I want to feel u I WANT TO FEEL YOUR hot air on my body I Want to feel your crazyness in slide of me I Want to make love crazy passion to u and make me yours once more and i..ll make u my has well love me my amor cuase i cant be with out you i..ll die with out u i love u i have fell in love with u has u with me mi boo.

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    WJduke commented on I WANT

    08-05-2009

    You really need to proveread your work before you put-down on a computer. This poem will be a whole lot better when you do that. PLEASE!!
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    laydbak1 commented on I WANT

    07-03-2009

    Ah, the ambiance of lust and love, all rolled up into one glorious dream of that next time together... Great call out.... Good write...
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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