I WAS BLIND N DID NOT SEE

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  • I Am So Sorry

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    Dedicated to a friend: She called me N asked these questions 2 me n not of me...I WILL NEVER EVER FORGET... R.I.P....09/30/2010 R.I.P....02/29/2016 DON'T BE BLIND LIKE ME...Cher

    I WAS BLIND N DID NOT SEE

    What do you say….When it’s all been said….
    What do you feel….When inside you're dead….


                              Where do you go….When you get lost along the way….
                             Where is the courage….When you're scared everyday….


    When do you just give in….When your world slowly shatters
    When do you walk away….When you realize it no longer matters


                               Who do you turn to….When you've closed all the doors….
                             Who will pick you up….When you're broken on the floor….


    Why all the pain….When you choose to be alone….
    Why sit all nite….When you know no one will phone….


                         How is life worth it….When it all seems so unfair….
                       How do you ask for help….When you think no one cares….

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    TREVON commented on I WAS BLIND N DID NOT SEE

    07-15-2012

    We have all been blind and let someone maybe ourselves down. But the cost of our mistakes was to high and we can not forgive ourselves. I know it happen to me and I lost at least 10 years of my life. Your words summed it all up great poem!
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    cheronld

    07/17/2012

    Thanks so much my friend....its those kind of questions that affect so many....its like a flashing red light....they want you to stop and look around....then ask....WHAT....WHERE....WHEN....WHO.....HOW....sometimes our mistakes....as you say....teaches someone else...and so on and so on.....thanks again Trevon....Cher

    FranzJ commented on I WAS BLIND N DID NOT SEE

    06-15-2012

    I think your friend has already forgiven you and would expect you to carry on - this poem is a realise your friend will understand - thanks for sharing and keep your head up - please don't be gone too long
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    cheronld

    07/09/2012

    Thanks so much for you kind words....its still a hard pill to swallow and some days I revert back to the....woulda...coulda...shoulda....moments....though the pain will never go away completely....it is getting better to face...thanks again...Cher

    tierra7 commented on I WAS BLIND N DID NOT SEE

    06-09-2012

    Such Sadness that we must encounter...I am sooo sorry for your Loss I kno' her loss and you writin' this has affected you in a big way...one thing Sweetie You did NOT let your Friend Down..I kno' this is not goin' to sound comfortin' but in a Special Spiritual way you were there when she needed you the most...we never kno' what a person is capable of ...sometimes there never are any signs...Tribal and I shall keep you in Prayer. and your dear friend too...you have gone thru soooo much..Do Not Crucify yourself .Continue to Be that Voice.....I would suggest you look around ...9 out of 10 people that you set forth to help you made a difference....Keep your spirits Up!!!keepin' you in Heart Thought and Prayer... Love & Light, Tierra
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    cheronld

    06/09/2012

    Thanks so much for such a TOUCHING sentiment with your comments....its never easy losing someone....and your words went straight to my heart...hugs...Cher

    VaZFynest commented on I WAS BLIND N DID NOT SEE

    01-27-2011

    My condolensces...................Your painis felt thru your words.....................great write poetess...........peace...............and solace in the Lord.God bless..............chin up and stay strong and keep ya head up!
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    cheronld

    01/27/2011

    Thanks so much for your kind words....they are truly appreciated...Cher

    copergirl commented on I WAS BLIND N DID NOT SEE

    01-24-2011

    Cher So sorry for your loss. Glad you are still here. Very nice thoughts--well put...TC Marlene
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    cheronld

    01/28/2011

    Thanks so much....I am trying to get back into the writing aspect of this site and hope to be able to share once again at some point....Cher

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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