I Was the Frito Bandito

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Unfortunatley for Frankie, and my conscience slapping me around, this is true.  I was not a great kid (but I did love my family)

I Was the Frito Bandito

In the school yard I played hard

An unremarkable mind of late

Fantastic double dealings of lunches spoiled

Temptations broiled, my secret weighed great

 

Frankie, no last name, was an end game

To quench, by contribution, my mouth’s greed

And the stench, with no contrition, or abolition

Went on for months, as I got my feed

 

In a room of desks interned

To wait for their abusers

I hid in silent shadows

To loot a lunch box

Of a schoolmate

No excuses

 

A spell of power, unlike flower

Spiraled up through my being

 A brook of watering glands

And clammy hands

Raced my heart at what

I was seeing.

 

A stroke of heightened fear as goal was near

In moments, the satiation of addiction

The bright and gladdening find, so clear

Hasty, giddy elation, paired with contradiction

Yellow and red were never among my pleasing hues

May it never be said, they were without use

Stepping away from recluse, I’d be the first to accuse

The slobby kid from a family of nine, being loose

 

I’d have to chew fast, while in hallways I passed

The honorable faculty unsuspecting

I dare not breathe hard on this morn

For the scent from my mouth was that of corn

 

This guilt I carried long on the premise it was wrong

My face could have been read like the morning paper

Just another kid who got hurt and would bleed

Considering the probable end of this caper

 

To disclose my past foul pranks

Is personal infamy of lowered ranks

While in 1963, memories flanked

By munching Fritos at the cost of Frank

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Corey1Hillen commented on I Was the Frito Bandito

01-13-2010

They say it cleanses the soul, and I hope that's the case with your writing this poem, but his confession amused me to no end. I'm still laughing ....but with admiration for your craft and originality.

Marsink

01/13/2010

A laugh is as medicine for the soul ( and do I need to laugh). glad it was worth the read for you, Richard.

trgetal commented on I Was the Frito Bandito

01-08-2010

Marck, you writte with such intensity, Iam often overwhelmedand have to read it again, I would like to be such a writer, myself, but I do the best I can! you've told me in the beautiful Haiku you sent to me, while I was very ill. Thands, this one is definitely a 10!! TRG

Marsink

01/08/2010

You do me too much honor in the time invested to read my poems. Thank you, Sir Tomas. Godspeed

Charlie23 commented on I Was the Frito Bandito

01-07-2010

Your poems and comments always make me smile, Marsink! I enjoyed the style of poem the most, the curvature of the third and fourth stanzas...was that intentional, interesting.

Marsink

01/07/2010

I can't see your smile, but your compliments can put a smile on my face: sort of vicarious, isn't it? Thanks, Charlie!

ginga commented on I Was the Frito Bandito

12-28-2009

LOL! This is too much Marsink. I love the escapades of the kid with the hidden Fritos...a great poem to share. (I have posted an oldie of mine frm my high school days titled: Twas the Night Before New Years which you may enjoy). ginga

Marsink

12/28/2009

Thank you for the read and I hope to get by your place asap!

Aria commented on I Was the Frito Bandito

12-25-2009

Funny how we hang on to such small incidents in our childhood and they somehow help shape us into the people we are today. Mars, it's okay. You were a kid....just a kid who loved Fritos! It's a good write and very personal. Thanks for sharing. - my secret was sneaking a Nestle's Crunch into math class after lunch and eating it without the teacher catching me.

Marsink

12/26/2009

I really appreciate your candor. I've had this secret for 47 yrs. I am surprised at the response from writing this on the fly. I hope I can instill some life lesson to my daughters (if I tell them about this)

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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Degradation of Doubt 8
Shore Scarce Known 13
Pretense 13
The Remains 13
Wormwood 15
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Yellow Orb, Parts I-IV 5
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Catastrophic 6
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