I Weep In My Sorrows

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    • I Reflect from light......SO think of me as a----> S-T-A-R!

    I Weep In My Sorrows

    So solemly I remorse, for our followers of tomorrow,
    To hear such speech, as I weep in my sorrows.

    -- This world that we're in today, blows winds of a fasage.
    And left are human murals, collaborated by collage.

    Not to think of Earth's worth, it nearly passes our brain.
    Yet the bicker beyond the whispers, battle life to maintain.

    Its funny how such things as fame, have such a young minority,
    And now us as a people bounce like checks in such majority,
    When really we can do the same, change our names, and get it together in all, MORALLY!

    So for ears that can hear, I ask for one thing to borrow--

    So solemnly I remorse, for our followers of tomorrow,
    To hear such speech, as I weep in my sorrows....

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    mamasan commented on I Weep In My Sorrows

    11-15-2009

    Your name is your fame....Poeticmind.....and intuitively this old lady says that you shall see fame of the finest grade.....

    PoeticMind

    11/16/2009

    PLEASE TELL ME HOW...I HEAR IT FROM SO MANY BUT WHEN DOES THE LIGHT ALLOW U TO REVEAL UR SHADOW!! I THINK I BECOMIN EERIE BEING IN THE DARK...

    PoeticMind

    11/16/2009

    PLEASE TELL ME HOW...I HEAR IT FROM SO MANY BUT WHEN DOES THE LIGHT ALLOW U TO REVEAL UR SHADOW!! I THINK I BECOMIN EERIE BEING IN THE DARK...

    Mosfabulous commented on I Weep In My Sorrows

    07-10-2009

    This poem is of da chain. That was touching i guess.

    mysticmynd commented on I Weep In My Sorrows

    06-18-2009

    Man keep up the great work and I shall see you name on the cover of a book some day soon. Keep ya head up.

    PoeticMind

    06/19/2009

    ty for taking the time to even view my work....it means alot ~Aleem

    Khadija commented on I Weep In My Sorrows

    05-30-2009

    All I can say is DEEP, DEEP! DEEP! I just wanted to let you know that i really enjoyed you poem. Keep up the good work.

    PoeticMind

    06/19/2009

    ty for taking the time to even view my work....it means alot ~Aleem

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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