I wish I could forget you

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    This is a poem about a girl who loved two guys and dated them (not at the sme time) and is now trying to forget them.

    I wish I could forget you

    I wish I could forget you
    You and your big brown eyes
    And you and your deep green eyes
    I wish I could forget you
    You and your shy ways
    And you and your daring ways
    I wish I could forget you
    You and your nice personality
    And your and your playful personality
    I wish I could forget you
    Both of you and our memories

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    deedeemcgee commented on I wish I could forget you

    09-06-2009

    This sounds almost my life with my past two loves. Very interesting and I love it, I almost can feel your emotions as you wrote it.

    laydbak1 commented on I wish I could forget you

    06-12-2009

    If a choice is given, and the choice is neither, then very next step in evolutionary emotions, is forgetting without regretting... Just take the step and history will prove you were right... A good double-edged word play..... kudo's....

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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