i wont let you go

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i wont let you go

why do you have to leave my love
i dont want you to go
you told me so but now i see
that we were not ment to be frends but lovers
i want you to stay dont go
dont me leave me alone
i want to stay with you
now i relize this but its to late
your going leaving
for a long time still
i miss you already though you havent even left
dont go dont leave my love
i love you but i didnt relize it till now
please dont leave 
please stay with me
i love you i want you
i wish you didnt have to go
i dont want to let you go
my heat is breaking
that you have to leave
but i love you so much
if you go then please come back
please please
i....love....you
i wont let you go if i have to make you stay dont leave me
dont leave me
DONT LEAVE ME
I WONT LET YOU GO

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scrye commented on i wont let you go

08-30-2009

amithis an emotionally packed poem with so much to say. Beautiful poem and a powerfully written cry out for love. A great read thank you so much for sharing this with me.

Phoenix9 commented on i wont let you go

08-21-2009

if one truely loves and leaves they will return. but it's not the end if they don't, write about it , use your feelings but don't plead or beg, there will be others, life is too short for there not to be

bluewolf commented on i wont let you go

08-19-2009

Such a debth of love exprssed in poetic verse from one so young. However always remember this-love that holds depth for both will create a lasting love: immortal love.

Troubador commented on i wont let you go

08-19-2009

Honey you are such a young thing there will be many other guys in your life. Don't worry about a flash in the pan, there always be another.

cliftondurant commented on i wont let you go

08-19-2009

love is beautiful it is wonderful to be in love make sure he love you nice poem

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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