Ice Prince

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Sorry my worst poem yet. Kept getting distracted. =-)

Ice Prince

In a bleary, silent world,
full of rain and silent cries,
High up on his throne,
sits the somber prince of ice.
I first saw him at the ball,
in a serious tux of gray.
My dress was drab and simple,
and then he glanced my way.
Across the room our eyes did meet,
a small smile touched his lips,
We danced the night away,
with twirls and spins and dips.
Then it was time to say goodbye,
we were both reluctant to leave,
So we both leaned in, about to kiss,
before I woke up and realized it was a dream.

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Tempestlady commented on Ice Prince

01-28-2011

You ahd me at silent cries.....a wonderfully imaginative piece full of folly and frisk. I loved the upbeat feel to the story like cinderella in the snow. Write on......Tlady

Teardrops commented on Ice Prince

07-24-2010

this is good really good you have a great talent loved the flow thanks for the read Marie

GentleT commented on Ice Prince

07-24-2010

Your poem shows much emotion. There is pain and hurt in your words. I sense your betrayal by men that have exploited you. But our need to be loved is ever dominant. I believe you did a very nice job.

kdarcy commented on Ice Prince

07-24-2010

Damn, hate it when that happens ... a least you had a good time. A good little write, nothing wrong with that, be well

Rhymer commented on Ice Prince

07-24-2010

Maybe it was not a dram but simply melted from your passion. Excellent write.

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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