ICICLES

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    ICICLES

    icicles so beautifully formed
    one of natures near perfections
    but just a slight change
    turns them into melted confections

    with the warmth of sunshine
    they drip with tears of joy
    or fear they may disappear
    hoping the artic air will deploy

    dropping off roofs suicidally
    with a shattering end
    becoming crystalline shards
    not even nature can mend

    becoming one with the earth
    a puddle or shards of ice
    just to melt away again
    inability to survive its only vice

    icicles are like happiness
    one moment full of wonder
    the next broken and suddenly gone
    just another of life’s blunders

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    trocka7 commented on ICICLES

    06-23-2009

    This was so great to read, thank you so much for sharing this! I have a special love for icicles, so this captured me :) I really enjoy your writing style, keep it coming!

    mdpoetgirl commented on ICICLES

    06-02-2009

    This is great... made me think of my poem "Sunshine on a Winter's Day." I find icicles beautiful as well... i love nature with all its wonders and beauty... I especially love how you tied everything together in your last stanza and compared the quick dissipation of icicles to fleeting happiness. Great job here ;-)

    organicchick

    06/02/2009

    If i already haven't i will check out "sunshine on a winter's day"!

    freind commented on ICICLES

    04-06-2009

    no matter what dudley sayes ? i loved it

    Drivingczar commented on ICICLES

    04-02-2009

    Great write! I'll dream of icicles tonight!

    WordSlinger commented on ICICLES

    04-02-2009

    I like the ending, good, good poem, I gave it a 9

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