Identity

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Identity

Traits that separate you from the crowd
It's something that should be said quite loud
But what if you couldn't show it
For fear that you would blow it
To the people that you know the most
And for you it's like being a ghost
It's a feeling nobody should know of
Sort of like never getting any love
A constant depression
From so much suppression
Like having a part of you taken away
Or never knowing the joy of day
But what if it was a different place
Where everyone could shoe their true face
And not be blamed
Or ashamed
'Cause who you are inside
It does not want to hide
So let it out
And why not shout
That you are finally proud

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LadyIntellect commented on Identity

10-14-2009

BEAUTIFUL!I LOVE IT!Tony your writing is so inspiring!I can truly relate! keep it up!

outawhackjack commented on Identity

03-10-2009

good write

Plot121 commented on Identity

02-16-2009

your eye for description is good but I think you have alot of diferent ideas you tend to work with so its hard to find a core idea or message but good write none the less.

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

Tony’s Poems (79)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Escape 0
Simplicity 1
Unser Leben....Our Life 0
Nie...Never 0
Freedom 0
Recoil 0
Du & Me 0
Lass Uns Rennen....Let Us Run 0
Menschen...Hu
mans
0
Wiederholung.
..Repitition
0
Balance 0
Finality 1
Zusammen...To
gether
0
Für Dich....For You 1
Mein Geist....My Mind 0
Uns.....Us 0
Fall......Fal
l
0
Falschen Anschuldigung
en...False Accusations
0
Sicherheit...
Safety
0
Brech Aus...Break Out 0
Shadow 0
Cold 0
Certitude 0
Truth 0
Consciousness 0
Sacrifice 0
Two Become One 0
Sleep 0
Broken 1
Punishment 0
Reality 0
Warranted Infliction 0
Sky 1
Solitude 0
Future 0
Lies 0
Rules 1
Unavoidable 0
Empty 0
Maze 0
Alone 0
Sporadic 0
Struggle 0
Impossible 0
Ambush 0
Life's Song 0
Geh....Go 0
Nicht Mehr.......No More 0
"Gods" 1
Wonders 0
Das Ende.....The End 0
Vengance 0
Obstacle 0
Gone 0
Ewigkeit....E
ternity
0
Release 0
Hidden 2
Incapable 1
Breakdown 1
Guardian Soldiers 1
One Who Once Was 0
Creative Process 0
What Am I? 1
The Overpowering Desire 5
Spirit 1
Insanity 2
Constantly 1
Present Existence 5
Pain Inside 1
Liebe.... Love 1
Banning Books 3
Iron Man 0
What You Do 2
Someone 9
IDK 6
Deprivation 12
In Return 3
Identity 3
It 5