IF I COULD

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    IF I COULD

     If I could catch a rainbow,
    I would do it just for you.
    And share with you its' beauty, On the days you're feeling blue.

    If I could build a mountain,
    You could call your very own.
    A place to find seenity,
    A plce to be alone.

    If  I could take your troubles,
    I would toss them in the sea.
    But all these things I'm finding,
    Are impossible for me.

    I cannot build a mountain,
    Or catch a rainbow fair.
    But let me be what I know best,
    A friend That's always there.

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    missbaby commented on IF I COULD

    11-22-2009

    I like this poem alot, Its very sweet words, I think you write from your heart, Well written
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    infiniti commented on IF I COULD

    11-17-2009

    I like this piece it's very well written and it reminds me of a piece I did some years ago entitled"Closer Then Any Other" I will dig it up and try to post it tomorrow, so I hope u check it out. Your friend in poetry, Infiniti
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    mamasan commented on IF I COULD

    11-16-2009

    Nice thoughts and I am sure that your being a friend is more precious than the rest of those things you wish you could do for your friend.
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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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