if i fell in love


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    if i fell in love

    her eyes are electric jewels
    mined from a mountain of intense green stone
    they stir the marrow within my bones
    and i blush
    heat rises beneath my skin
    and i flush with love alone
    one look from her and i turn to fuels
    for i am melted by her gaze
    and the crescendo of radiant rays
              that live in her smile
    she is my small celebration
    and i applaud her parade
    i feel perfect when she happens upon me
                     my love,
    please look at me and make me feel flawless.

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    tierra7 commented on if i fell in love


    An Exquisite piece!!!!Very Emotive..written with such beauty and sooooo much soul!!!worthy of a 10+ ((((Huggz))))) Tierra @}-'-,



    wow. thank you so much and thank you for those inspirational words. i am so going to write more and continue to read.

    Kingwebstar commented on if i fell in love


    Wow I love this love poem so much you should write more love poems. I write love poems every single day no lie but I don't always post them. Love DA KING



    yeah, this one is one of my favourites and Lindsay loved it as well. i wished it could've workd out but we turned out needing different things.but, when i wrote this poem, i was deeply in love. i will post some of my love poems. i have to retrieve them from another site.



    okay I look forward to reading them as well

    purdylox commented on if i fell in love


    ahhhh you have found what every woman that I know wants to be I want to keep this poem just to remember that a man can think this like this and not lose hope. beautiful truly moving



    thank you again , purdylox. my favourite love poem. of course my only love poem. lol

    cheronld commented on if i fell in love


    A true romantic at heart.....I love the lines...."she is my small celebration and I applaud her parade"....great poem.....Crush..:-)



    oh thank you so much ! this is my most popular poem and my only entry about "love". i appreciate your time.

    xntric commented on if i fell in love


    Outstanding! You have a way with words. There is no better vehicle than love!



    thank you, i don't write many love poems but i must admit, i like this one. it is quite popular. you are too kind to speand so much time on my words.

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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    the people in the attic 1
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