If I Was Really Me

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If I Was Really Me

If I was really me, I'd be happier you see
For happiness does lie beneath my skin
My jokes are a refrain, to ease another's pain
And I know my Design is joy within

If I was really me, then I'd let others see
That joy and pain are two-sides of a coin
We laugh instead of cry, just like we live and die
And giggles always make us want to join

If I was really me, then I would feel quite free
To share my feelings with those strange or known
Not ashamed to fail or say that I feel frail
For these are traits that show how much I've grown

If I was really me, hey wait, I AM...YIPPEE
My life is mine and that is great to know
I can love or lose, life is mine to choose
And this my vow to NOT be STATUS QUO!

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ginga commented on If I Was Really Me

10-21-2009

Writer, I love how free flowing, quirky, and whimsical this poem reads. A rhythmic rhymer that even laughs at oneself. ginga

Writer1

10/25/2009

Thanks for your comment, Ginga. I do believe in laughing at myself, to the point of MUCH self-deprecation. But isn't that something to which we can all relate? :) I so appreciate your taking the time to read and comment!

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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