If Only Part 2

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    If Only Part 2
    If only I was Wrong and This wasn't A Charade.If only you were really there for me and not hiding in the shade. If only the love was real and not a fairy tale, another chapter in my life and once again I fail. If only for a moment used to be just fine, but at this present moment it has broke my F**king Spine. If Only this was a dream and not my worst nightmare. If only If only If only I didnt F*****g Care. If only my heart was not shattered on this very night, there's nothing left to hope for not even a little fight. If only I was gone never to feel this pain, I know that the storm is here again because I can feel the rain. If only.

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    tanisha6332 commented on If Only Part 2

    05-27-2009

    This poem was very deep. I felt like he was talking to me. I guess because i had done a little heart breaken in my past.
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    JasonDivine

    09/20/2019

    Hope you weren’t as bad as her lol and that’s cool that you felt it

    SClark20xx commented on If Only Part 2

    01-26-2009

    It's good but not really in Poetry form.
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    JasonDivine

    07/06/2009

    wtf is poetry form you DumbAs# its art and from my heart and you are an idiot

    JasonDivine

    07/26/2009

    sorry for my comment I was pissed off that day

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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