if there were love?, (now that's a different story), altogether

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    if there were love?, (now that's a different story), altogether

    sometimes, whenever the belief that i've
    an actual almost acquired direction.
    always at this moment i'm haunted
    with the memory of the injection.
    as if it somehow in effect won. why?
    it's not as if i have an affection for this dejection.
    only for the reality of its social disconnection.
    and each time to pass away
    into my very own unique resurrection.
    now i ask you, can life get any further from perfection?
    and that's yet another story of rejection.
    if i could just be in love?!
    i'd glady trade all this
    for thats protection.

                tyke

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    Worthless commented on if there were love?, (now that's a different story), altogether

    10-23-2009

    Love is fake and it ain't worth the time to try! It only makes you question why and leaves you with so much anger, regret and pain you won't even dare to cry. Stay single, it's the best way! That doesn't mean go screw everyone you come accross, that always gets you in messes you can't get out of! Sex isn't what it's cracked up to be... If i had to do it all over again, I would never have sex!!!!!

    knight4696 commented on if there were love?, (now that's a different story), altogether

    10-17-2009

    Tyke - This is truly deep. like a peek into your soul. I really believe that you are one of the best poets on this site. You have a special gift of being able to convey your thoughts and feelings in a remarkable way. Keep on wriitng my friend! Another Great Job! Ken

    tykehall

    11/03/2009

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    tykehall

    11/03/2009

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    tykehall

    11/03/2009

    ken having problems w/my mailbox on this sight my personal e-mail adress is tyke022002@yahoo.com

    tykehall

    11/03/2009

    ken having problems w/my mailbox on this sight my personal e-mail adress is tyke022002@yahoo.com

    warsaw commented on if there were love?, (now that's a different story), altogether

    10-17-2009

    Your "mind" is all the protection you need, if you allow it to do what God gave it the strength to do.. Guide and lead you to your great destiny, you are talented and have alot to offer please keep on writing, I love reading your work, keep your head up and continue to share with all of us, again thanks for sharing sincerely WARSAW

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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    I Love You 2
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    if there were love?, (now that's a different story), altogether 3
    love for some, play for others 1
    final dimension 2
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    little roy screw 1
    he did me father 2
    rising to the occasion 2
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    a familiar stranger 1
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    just a quickie 2
    my dearest 2
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    coping with composure 2
    parting past 2
    sparks 3
    the space your absence fills 2
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    inside the ride 1
    life's savings 1
    pursuing my dreams 2
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    one branch (observation) 1
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    floating hearts 1
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