If You Care

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    Written in high school..

    If You Care

    If you care,
    Why it is that I am there,
    I am here only because I care,
    You do not care about anybody,
    You only care about one somebody,
    That somebody is that of yourself,
    All you think is that we are just air,
    You do not care if we are dead,
    You do not care if we are alike,
    You do not care if we are alive,
    You do not care,
    You just do not give a care...

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    ShadowEyes commented on If You Care

    03-31-2011

    sad and true... a lot of people these days seem to think that. very nicely written. Keep up the writing.

    BooTz commented on If You Care

    08-26-2009

    this piece is sad but kinda da truth. makes u think if anybody really cares. i like it

    bforibus commented on If You Care

    08-26-2009

    loss of motivation for life is sad, but all so true for some many ppl. great job on the darkness

    KristyLoren commented on If You Care

    08-25-2009

    Very intriguing and bittersweet. I like it. Wonderful lyrics!!!

    melanie23 commented on If You Care

    08-20-2009

    it sounds like ur talking about one of my ex's. to many ppl r that way. i dont think i could have pit it in words any better than u did.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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