If You Knew

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    • Christina13
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    If You Knew
    Q:If you knew this breath
    ,This moment was your last,
    Would you savor it like
    A cigerett after sex,
    Or waist it like
    You waisted your
    Life?

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    Madelynn commented on If You Knew

    09-08-2009

    ARE YOU SERIOUS!?-You are This kick-flippin-butt of a writer!!I had not a clue what I was just steppin into-..then I stepped!Stopped!Read Again!-then Again!!-and just shook my head back and forth,with a holy crap/she has the mind for it-look on my face!-Christine!!-I love stuff like this.Me and my bro call this stuff Mind Gumbo;this is cool hun.very! Sexy and radical,and conflicting with inner search,all in the context of what-like 6lines-and one word?Ima smilin'big ten smiles!
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    Christina13

    10/10/2009

    Thanx! Appreciate it. Glad you liked it, not bad seeing how I wrote it for a poem of “self discovery” for Writing Class, especially considering I wrote it in like a minute.

    WordSlinger commented on If You Knew

    08-22-2009

    i love lol, can I get a jump start, wow sis, on ehas found ya since ya posted, it;s ok I love ya, :P
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    WordSlinger

    08/22/2009

    I see the Rate RIPPER RATED you

    Christina13

    08/29/2009

    Thanx. I just hope others like it as much as you do.

    Letitflow commented on If You Knew

    12-15-2008

    I like the food for thought. Reminds me of time that i have wasted that i wish i could change. It's deep!
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    Christina13

    08/29/2009

    Thanx. I just wish we all could see that it's better to regret what you've done, then what you havn't done.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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