If Your Love Could See Me Now

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    This is a poem about a man who realizes that commitment can be a wonderful thing. If you wait to long... the opportunity may be lost.

    If Your Love Could See Me Now

    You watched me walk away
    Crying silently by the door
    So many questions left unanswered
    From our fight the night before

    We had a fight about marriage
    You had wanted to take my hand
    I would have stayed and worked it out
    Had I been a stronger man

    I have always been the restless kind
    Never stayed in love to long
    One word of commitment spoken
    And by morning I was gone

    Now in this time spent by myself
    I have come to realize
    The part of you I miss the most
    Is the love thats in your eyes

    So honey I'm asking for a second chance
    To give you what you need
    And if you open your heart again
    You will see a change in me

    I'll take your hand in my hand
    And pledge those solemn vows
    I'll place that ring upon your finger
    If your love could see me now

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    labitch commented on If Your Love Could See Me Now

    11-29-2010

    I love this. It's every girl's dream of the guy coming back to make up. I'm putting no exclamations because I want to respect this beautiful poem

    tierra7 commented on If Your Love Could See Me Now

    11-17-2010

    Hi Sweetie, I love how this is written....raw emotions...at their best..(if this is 'bout you) then I must say....if she sees what I see....she will give you that second chance...Peace, Love and Light, Tierra@}-'-,

    lonewolf

    11/17/2010

    thanks for the comment, which is really appreciated. I can say however that this poem is not about me. just something i made up.

    devaamido commented on If Your Love Could See Me Now

    11-11-2010

    This poem is smoothly crafted and powerfully poignant. It gets 10m from me. Yet the story is so smoothly conceived & executed, I'd wonder how long this kind of sentiment could hold you & your lover together, over the long-haul.

    Springsize commented on If Your Love Could See Me Now

    11-09-2010

    You have a history of writing smooth, considerate and carefully detailed attention to loving, from the mental side of life.... poetic ease and emotionally moving... and now, from the sounds of lamenting, in an orchestra of adoration... THIS poem is a beautiful look of your love, thank you for posting this...

    lonewolf

    11/11/2010

    thank you for such a wonderful comment. I am humbled by your words

    StandingBear commented on If Your Love Could See Me Now

    11-05-2010

    Written well relating many guy's situations where they let love pass them by. A second chance may arrive if they're fortunate.

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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